> If that's what you're doing, I see the value: you're the Drobo to Riverbed's NetApp. You've got me exactly. > Your "benefits" section is still too technical

> If that's what you're doing, I see the value: you're the Drobo to Riverbed's NetApp. You've got me exactly. > Your "benefits" section is still too technical, where it isn't, it's too fuzzy. I agree - I've been struggling a lot with the copy. When I try and make it less technical it ends up being fuzzy. I'm interested in hiring a copywriter if I can get any good recommendations.