> 1) Too geeky language - rather tell a story Company XYZ solved a problem by... The page given is the technical detail. The front page of the site http://www.

> 1) Too geeky language - rather tell a story Company XYZ solved a problem by... The page given is the technical detail. The front page of the site http://www.synctus.com/ http://www.synctus.com/ is less geeky.