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It was incredibly well-written. Much respect to her. You can tell that she is the kind of person that demands action and hates any kind of BS. Very business li
by MicroBerto 11y ago
It was incredibly well-written. Much respect to her.
You can tell that she is the kind of person that demands action and hates any kind of BS. Very business like.
This is also why you should always write emails assuming they're public record. Because one day... They just might be!
- hueving 11y agoIt was quite 'over-written', if that's even a term. The sentences were very dense with long compound sentences. Maybe I'm just stupid, but I feel like it's a failure on her part to drown the reader in text with a low readability score that isn't even jargon.
- gizmo686 11y agoIn fairness to her, her preamble explicitly stated that it was written hastily and without revision, and she did explicitly ask that, if it was to be shared, her name not be attached to it.
- SixSigma 11y ago> As is often said, if I had more time - and less emotion - I would have written a shorter letter.