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Sounds interesting, but you should have someone edit your copy. Below is a sample of some issues I found. > We are the first to do this. Have cheap prices? No
by michaelmior 11y ago
Sounds interesting, but you should have someone edit your copy. Below is a sample of some issues I found.
> We are the first to do this.
Have cheap prices? Not really a selling a point.
> We care about not only the privacy
"the" is unnecessary here
> we guarantee that our interface is top of the notch
The expression is just "top notch"
> so that you could easily spin up and deploy new servers
"can" easily spin up
> every month you'll receive discounts and other prop
What is a "prop"?