If I was writing that to most bosses I've had, the first line would include the words 'death', 'critical', 'failure', 'negligent', etc. I would assume it would

If I was writing that to most bosses I've had, the first line would include the words 'death', 'critical', 'failure', 'negligent', etc. I would assume it would be skimmed otherwise. Even still, I would guess that a lot of the stuff in the middle would be skimmed and I'd have to reiterate my point in the last sentence. Ya it's a bad situation.