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1. Your pitch is too full of marketing fluff. Get to the point, use simple words to explain what your product would do, and don't oversell the idea. 2. If you
by creamyhorror 11y ago
1. Your pitch is too full of marketing fluff. Get to the point, use simple words to explain what your product would do, and don't oversell the idea.
2. If you think about and iterate your idea a bit more, you get LinkedIn. You'll need to take a different direction that offers some other value/convenience that LinkedIn doesn't. Your differentiator might be allowing users to personalized the design of their "virtual card", but that might not offer enough added value over LinkedIn.