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A little bit of a meta-comment, but I find this article very hard to read. There's no clear delineation between different arguments / sections of the article, m
by keithwhor 11y ago
A little bit of a meta-comment, but I find this article very hard to read. There's no clear delineation between different arguments / sections of the article, meaning I can't skip to find a piece of content I might be the most interested in. Additionally, the hyper-thin content section gives the illusion of a wall-of-text. My eyes have to jump lines every few words, causing an interruption of sentence flow and structure. It's very distracting, and the presentation (especially considering the technically-heavy content) hurts the message.
- luisrudge 11y agoKeep in mind that english is not the author's native language.
- phaed 11y agoNo excuse, formatting is not language dependent.
- eyko 11y agoI'm not a native english speaker, but I felt the same. You would expect misuse of expressions or some sentences being strangely constructed / difficult to understand, but overall the structure of the article should be more or less clear.