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I'd drop the word "advising", e.g., "Where to go next, based on where you are now" Or just "Where to go next from where you are now" That, however, makes it
by davelnewton 11y ago
I'd drop the word "advising", e.g.,
"Where to go next, based on where you are now"
Or just
"Where to go next from where you are now"
That, however, makes it sound like navigation, which it isn't--it's similarity ranking, leaving
"Places like where you're at"
Or
"Seven places like where I am"
Note the pronoun change; seems more conversational too.
I dunno; none of these strike me as right, but I don't think what's there is going to grab anyone by the face.
I'd make the text below the fold more conversational, e.g., it's a pretty rare occasion I hear anybody say "venue":
"You're at an amazing place"
"You want places like it"
- wiemee 11y agoThanks! Great tips. Dropping the "advising" part is a good idea.