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Great job! Weaving through the math, diagrams and code like this is a great setup. You might consider adding a little more force and excitement into the writin
by jeads 11y ago
Great job! Weaving through the math, diagrams and code like this is a great setup.
You might consider adding a little more force and excitement into the writing, to keep people engaged. Maybe a joke. You'll catch a wider audience that way.
"There are a number of things to note about a... " <- This paragraph needs to be rewritten for clarity. The text is disjointed and redundant. The diagram above it should probably be made with a larger, clearer font and rearranged a little.
- stephenoman 11y agoThanks very much for reading and for the constructive feedback.