Here's a version that I commented on in Libre/Open Office (an *.odt file), but I assume you could probably open it in a modern version of MS-Office, and have th

Here's a version that I commented on in Libre/Open Office (an *.odt file), but I assume you could probably open it in a modern version of MS-Office, and have the comments come through fine): http://s000.tinyupload.com/?file_id=62873318985673539567 http://s000.tinyupload.com/?file_id=62873318985673539567