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I think you're right. Focus on the personal consumers market, its what you enjoy the most so you will do the best work. I think the splash page need a review b
by vfc1 11y ago
I think you're right. Focus on the personal consumers market, its what you enjoy the most so you will do the best work.
I think the splash page need a review by a third party designer. can you get someone on a freelance site to refresh it? I think the spacing is not correct in the bunny and the button. Probably moving the bunny to the left and pushing the title off.
I think the page looks professional, but there is something about it thats not OK can't put my finger on it.
I think the contrast in the yellow bar is wrong. it stands out too much. I would move the content of the bar right bellow the title and remove the yellow background.
I read some design stuff about Content, Repetition, Alignement and Proximity and helps a bit. specially when we look on a page too long and can't see the issues anymore that are apparent to new users.
I think your pricing is wrong, you should not use 5$ its a well known marketing thing.
I would bump it to 6.99$ to new subscribers its probably your optimal price. Or 4.99$ but i think people would pay for it all the same at close to 7$.
Your best marketing tool on the internet is a blog. This gives google a lot more to work with to index your page. You are passionate about the subject I'm sure you would write great posts that would hit front page.
The blog should be on your domain readlang.com/blog. check if ghost.org supports that otherwise go for a subdomain blog.readlang.com, and make links in both directions. Don't put publicity on the blog, it would like allow competition to advertise. Put a home made add to your own product.
- fibbery 11y agoYour comment intrigued me so I took a look at the site - agreed, the hierarchy is kind of strange and the primary green color is overused. Took about 5 minutes rearranging stuff in chrome console: http://imgur.com/uS7AolF http://imgur.com/uS7AolF
- rudolf0 11y agoI agree, that looks a lot nicer. Easier on the eyes.
- kami8845 11y agoThis made my day, not only are people offering much-needed advice (3 years .... this is so painful to read), you're actually offering a free redesign. Thanks for this (because apparently OP is too busy defending his bad decisions)
- steveridout 11y agoThanks - I like it! I'll do a split test and let you know how it goes.
- fibbery 11y agoPlease do! I'd love to see the outcome.