Submission Note: There are some legitimate points in the article, but a lot of it is buried under poor phrasing and inconsistent goal of the article. I think if

Submission Note: There are some legitimate points in the article, but a lot of it is buried under poor phrasing and inconsistent goal of the article. I think if the author spent some time with an editor polishing this it would go viral. I changed the title to something more neutral that the original.