Do you mind writing something a bit more substantial? I don't mind criticism, but I'd rather you explain how I did that. I'm not sure how to measure this, but

Do you mind writing something a bit more substantial? I don't mind criticism, but I'd rather you explain how I did that. I'm not sure how to measure this, but I feel that I dealt with the substance of a large percentage of the article (as shown in its title), and that I did it very fairly with how the article was written. But if you think otherwise, please - tell me what I've missed!