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Thank you, as a non-native English speaker this is extremely valuable feedback. I'll rework the text. One idea is that could literally run a infrastructure dif
by Rezo 11y ago
Thank you, as a non-native English speaker this is extremely valuable feedback. I'll rework the text.
One idea is that could literally run a infrastructure diff of your architecture and your live environment, for example after a deployment or between two points in time: You may have resources left over by accident, or not captured in the design.
- WillAbides 11y agoI like the delta sentence. It is artful. The only reason the intent is unclear is a lack of context. I didn't see anything else on the page that references difs or deltas. I am looking forward to trying cloudcraft on Monday when I have to document a cluster of ec2 instances.
- jewbacca 11y agoI agree, I love the original construction. It's extremely compelling, big-league copy. How about just tuning slightly simpler: "Somewhere in the difference between your current understanding and the reality of the cloud, lies cost savings and insight."
- biot 11y agoI must echo the other reply: the "delta" phrase communicates far more than the "simpler" rewording does, to the point where the simplified text reads as little more than meaningless marketing fluff. Perhaps it would be clearer to word it as "Between your current understanding ..." instead of "In the delta of your current understanding ..." But keep the rest the same; it's a beautiful sentence.
- estsauver 11y ago"`diff` for your AWS infrastructure" might work.