Well written. Just one more point, the form link seems to have been redacted. Asking customers to fill yet another form is painful. But then topping it off with

Well written. Just one more point, the form link seems to have been redacted. Asking customers to fill yet another form is painful. But then topping it off with "The next message we'll be sending out will include when you are getting your WakeMate and a link to finalize your purchase. To stay on our list be sure to fill out and submit the above form!" is just awful. That sounds like if I don't fill this form, I may not even get my order!