You were probably already better informed on Jersey than most of us were before reading the article. There may have been significant details left out, but as a

You were probably already better informed on Jersey than most of us were before reading the article. There may have been significant details left out, but as a broad brush I felt the article probably did a good job of presenting a general picture of the island's economy. Perhaps there are some important specifics that you would like to contribute, rather than just criticising the article's tone.