The article would certainly be less awkward and more interesting if he involved other people than just himself and Einstein. Even if he's exclusively describin

The article would certainly be less awkward and more interesting if he involved other people than just himself and Einstein. Even if he's exclusively describing the evolution of his own thought and linking to his own articles, each discovery and theoretical advancement would better be presented in terms of upstream research that brought it along and predated it, crediting others whenever possible. Science is a network, too!