Completely agree. I don't usually edit things I read, but this paragraph... I want to examine the details of this large corporate investment surge, and why it

Completely agree. I don't usually edit things I read, but this paragraph... I want to examine the details of this large corporate investment surge, and why it matters. Cities are the spaces where those without power get to make a history and a culture, thereby making their powerlessness complex. If the current large-scale buying continues, we will lose this type of making that has given our cities their cosmopolitanism. ...loses absolutely nothing if you lop off the entire first sentence. Whoever was editing this fell asleep at the switch.