Your answer to her numerous, valid complaints about the police's lack of transparency and show of force is for her to decrease the percentage of crime committed

Your answer to her numerous, valid complaints about the police's lack of transparency and show of force is for her to decrease the percentage of crime committed by people that look like her? That is, you believe a more effective article would have read, "Fellow minority women: please stop committing a disproportionate amount of crime. In light of your changes, my neighbor will not call the police the next time he sees me outside my apartment with a locksmith. Even if he does, at least the police the will respond more moderately and transparently." I'm not trying to be inflammatory. I'm trying to illustrate that your suggestion does not address her concerns about police transparency and overreaction. Try not to dig your heels in. Consider that in this case you may have focused on the wrong thing.