I disagree. I read a bit of the rant and didn't feel like reading the rest: its not short, its not to the point, its full of language that, despite not being di

I disagree. I read a bit of the rant and didn't feel like reading the rest: its not short, its not to the point, its full of language that, despite not being directed at me, made me feel bad. The "rewritten" version is short and to the point. Its clear and it uses neutral language. I read it and immediately understood what the issue is with the proposed code and why the changed code is better. So for me, the rewritten version was many many times better because I could actually understand it without having to force myself to read something long and horrible.