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> The language on your page might use a tweak too. It's clean and clear, but not entirely suggestive. I would get help changing that, if it were me. Thanks a l
by jnardiello 11y ago
> The language on your page might use a tweak too. It's clean and clear, but not entirely suggestive. I would get help changing that, if it were me.
Thanks a lot for this. Both me and my wife are non-english, it's really hard to choose the right words. We might need some help from a professional copywriter.
- ddingus 11y agoIndeed. Good copy is tough. Hope you see sales soon!