I feel conflicted. This is something Asians, particular East Asians, need to be more active in, but this is poorly written. It's hard to follow and doesn't say

I feel conflicted. This is something Asians, particular East Asians, need to be more active in, but this is poorly written. It's hard to follow and doesn't say anything. Maybe if more Asians write more on this topic then we will get better at it.