Really hard to read, like all of his writings. A version with my edits as I read: http://akkartik.name/blog/naggum-atlas http://akkartik.name/blog/naggum-atlas

Really hard to read, like all of his writings. A version with my edits as I read: http://akkartik.name/blog/naggum-atlas http://akkartik.name/blog/naggum-atlas My surgery likely butchered the original. Errors in where I inserted paragraph and section boundaries will correspond to limitations in my understanding. I'm putting it up partly so you can tell me what I've totally missed.