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Nice landing page. One copyedit: "Why my visitors go away?" sounds like sad Hulk. "Why do my visitors go away?" is better, or maybe adopt the funnel-speak of th
by jameshart 11y ago
Nice landing page. One copyedit: "Why my visitors go away?" sounds like sad Hulk. "Why do my visitors go away?" is better, or maybe adopt the funnel-speak of the growth hackers you're trying to attract and go with "Why do visitors abandon my site?"
- bilus 11y agoGood point, thanks! I went too far when trying to shorten everything as much as possible.