I would change: > Moments, which we launched last week, is a great beginning. To: > Moments, which we launched last week, illustrates the problem. It missed

I would change: > Moments, which we launched last week, is a great beginning. To: > Moments, which we launched last week, illustrates the problem. It missed the mark. I honestly don't think Jack or Ev think Moments, in its current incarnation, embodies what Twitter is or should be.