The problem with this title is that it's the anti-clickbait, like 'Unusual Incident in New Jersey' would be for an article covering the Hindenburg. I liked the

The problem with this title is that it's the anti-clickbait, like 'Unusual Incident in New Jersey' would be for an article covering the Hindenburg. I liked the original title; it's a good, well-written and engaging article, and the title drew me to it.