3 ms·
Surprisingly consistent and hilarious for a first ever screen play!
by jamiefriedrech 11y ago
Surprisingly consistent and hilarious for a first ever screen play!
- hurricaneSlider 11y agoOnly part I felt was inconsistent was his treatment of Lauren. She seems a hyper-rational, albeit overly-prudent character, and doesn't strike me as wanting to be involved with the whole boys club nonsense.