This feedback is a little harsh. OP's grammar is perfectly valid, it just isn't consistent with writing style we are used to seeing in a Resume. OP -- I think

This feedback is a little harsh. OP's grammar is perfectly valid, it just isn't consistent with writing style we are used to seeing in a Resume. OP -- I think this link will help you rework your resume so its more consistent with others from the US http://www.ceswoodstock.org/job_search/resumegram.shtml http://www.ceswoodstock.org/job_search/resumegram.shtml