If you want to target the high-end market, you really need better copywriting than this. From elementary typos ("an" before consonants, "it's" instead of "its")

If you want to target the high-end market, you really need better copywriting than this. From elementary typos ("an" before consonants, "it's" instead of "its") to some really poorly structured sentences, this really failed to impress as _the_ place for anything related to luxury goods.